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i say you did well for your first attempt

honestly, its actually pretty good. the hardstyle bass doesnt need to be, for lack of a better word, extremely HARD. there are plenty of tracks that have similar kicks like the one you used. its pretty good but my only criticism is to extend the 20 second section where you have the hardstyle beat, maybe just double that part.

otherwise good song.
5/5

Kr1z responds:

Thanks for the review!

wow must leave review

i downloaded this after listening to about a minute. what a well made song. everything flows terrific. the melody is eargasmic. nothing else needs to be said.

great song.
10/10
5/5
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really good! :)

i really like the way you altered teh melody. i wish there would of been more melody like 1:00-1:13
the new instrument somewhat overpowers that. but it still sounds good. i just would of liked to be able to hear that section more :D

good job, and 5/5

Fredgy responds:

keej thanks :D
maybe i'll change a bit up so you hear it some more :p
thanks!

didnt write a review the first time i listened

which is funny because i ended up listening to it for a half hour while doing stuff on the computer. great 100th submission. very calm/happy song.

keep it up, you are truly one of my top ten fav artists of all time

5/5

i thought it was pretty good :)

my only qualm would be to create more note distinction for a melody. its kind of hard to explain but someone commented on one of my songs with the same idea. basically, you song has really good horizontal movement but id like to see more vertical movement. maybe like every 8 beats, throw up the melody or somethin :P
but it wasn't a bad song :D
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5/5

imadethisfromboredom responds:

I see what you're saying. Instead of making it repeat itself change up the key a little bit. I'll definitely work on it, maybe upload the remake :O

Thanks for the review

nice!

reading your reply to the comment below, its always a good idea to save a semi completed version of your song twice with two different names. So when you go in depth into editing it, you still have the original if it turns out to be a flop :)

good song though :)
5/5

SpazeMusic responds:

Yeah but i maybe think i've fixed this again lol, so the fullversion will maybe be released in a month maybe? but will sound different as hell xD but yeah, anyway thanks for the review! :D

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im sure many people can relate to the emotion pouring through this song. i love the song's slow melody. it seems so simple yet put together properly, it really drive bring out personal hardships.

It's nice to see you slowly returning and letting others know who you looked up too.
10/10
5/5

pretty good

you did a good job using the eurogate in this song. pretty sweet melody, it gives the feeling of walking down a dark alley waiting for a fight :D

the percussion was good but it almost felt empty. i'm not sure how to describe it, im probably missing the kick in my head :P
but it was a good song
5/5
9/10

very nice =]

i loved the kick that was used and the melody was nice. ill def check out more of your music
10/10
5/5
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pretty good

the only reason i didnt give you a 10 was because it seems to be lacking something. it just feels a little empty to me. like someone else said below me, this could be a pretty good hardstyle song. keep up the good work

5/5

photosyntesen responds:

Thank you :D yes it is a bit empty i will try to make it a bit less empty xD

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